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Joshua Bo Gallotti (@divolino) |
"If You Go Away" is Rod McKuen's English-language version of the 1959 Jacques Brel song "Ne me quitte pas". Created as part of a larger project to bring Brel's work into English. In the original French version, the singer begs for his lover not to leave him and is more supplicant and almost self-humiliating (the title "Ne me quitte pas" translates as "Do not leave me"). The last image of the French version is significant: although the McKuen version has lyrics that come close to the original sentiment, the French lyrics are far bleaker (as is the song in general): "Let me become the shadow of your shadow, the shadow of your hand, the shadow of your dog" (lit. translation of the original) as opposed to "I'd have been the shadow of your shadow if I thought it might have kept me by your side" (English lyrics).
i must say, Mr. Mckuen did a brilliant job, which is not often the case when translating foreign language lyric into English. Although it is not 100% word to word, still the whole atmosphere of the emotional state was captured.
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Michel:
@divolino I know this song in French... You offer an outstanding performance with this great Hit... You have a beautiful voice... Really enjoyed my listen... Bravo...
Aug 15th 2025, 4:53 am Report
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Cash:
@divolino beautifully sang Bo, we loved our listen, awesome and perfect
Aug 15th 2025, 6:20 am Report
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Mark Foote:
markstunes Hi Josh.. I don't know the song but your soft compassionate delivery was a pleasure to listen in on pardner.
Aug 15th 2025, 6:23 am Report
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Jerry:
I've loved this song for years but have never recorded it, and you're a great reason I won't be trying it any time this century! Great delivery Joshua...this is a superior recording!
Aug 15th 2025, 7:52 am Report
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Joshua Bo Gallotti:
@michelj Thank You Michel. i hope the French lyric part won't be too put off for you. i tried to pronounce it as accurate as i could. Wish you a relaxing weekend.
Aug 16th 2025, 2:58 am Report
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Joshua Bo Gallotti:
@cash Thank You Cash, wish you guys a relaxing weekend.
Aug 16th 2025, 2:58 am Report
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Joshua Bo Gallotti:
@jerry Dear, i am so surprise that you've never recorded this song. In my own point of view it would be a perfect song for your vocal technique & voice. i really believe you'd do a wonderful rendition of this song. i am mush looking forward to it.
Aug 16th 2025, 3:07 am Report
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Joshua Bo Gallotti:
@aragorn Thanks Aragorn for stopping by and i wish you a happy weekend.
Aug 16th 2025, 3:07 am Report
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Marc:
@divolino A most excellent sing here, your voice is just magical here, Jacques Brel lived in the same country as where I live, but was most of the time French spreaking and singing. Your French is excelllent though...bravo, this is a superb cover!
Aug 17th 2025, 2:00 am Report
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Bev:
@divolino A really beautiful sing here Joshua. Loved my listen today. ❤♫
Aug 18th 2025, 9:08 am Report
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Joshua Bo Gallotti:
divolino Thank You for the kind words and i am very relieved that the French lyric is passable to native ears. My father taught me those few words.
Aug 24th 2025, 12:59 am Report
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Joshua Bo Gallotti:
@marc Thank You for the kind words and i am very relieved that the French lyric is passable to native ears. My father taught me those few words.
Aug 24th 2025, 12:59 am Report
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Joshua Bo Gallotti:
@bevb Thank You Bev.
Aug 24th 2025, 1:00 am Report
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