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Tom (@tlsteelman) |
HELP ME I'M STUCK! I have composed this song just a few days ago and it's racking my mind! It's unusual I know, even a little strange. But I cannot for the life of me write the words for it! So I present it to you who have creative word skills. If not maybe we can write it together as a group; might be fun and different. And even though the words don't come maybe you can suggest a tweak or two. Something's too loud; drums, guitar, synth? In any event, I'd thought we might all have fun with it. Thanks guys...
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admin:
@tlsteelman You are so talented Tom. I really like the beat o this and I dont think it would be to hard to write something to fit this. I may have a crack at it with one of my many poems/songs Ive written. Regardless good luck with this ♥
May 8th 2020, 4:54 am Report
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Qwilleran:
@tlsteelman It's a nice sound and beat, saved a copy, will see, or hear, if it prods me to lyricist it.
May 8th 2020, 6:32 am Report
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Jay Dotson:
jay455Awesome music hope you find the words would be a brilliant song.
May 8th 2020, 9:34 am Report
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Jerry:
@tlsteelman It's a great melody..."I don't know what to do...How can I get over you?...You left standing in the rain...but I am the one to blame...Just yesterday we kissed in the park and listened to the medowlark..." Just a thought to start with...the lines seems to match the cycles in the melody.
May 8th 2020, 12:46 pm Report
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Keith laird:
@tlsteelman Nice if i get a chance over the weekend I will download and give it some words
May 8th 2020, 5:43 pm Report
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Angelsong:
@tlsteelman Great tune, Tom, hope you get some great lyrics, can't wait to hear the finished song!
May 8th 2020, 6:12 pm Report
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Keith laird:
@tlsteelman There you go Tom - maybe not so helpful - but it was all i could manage on short notice LOL
May 8th 2020, 10:20 pm Report
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Tom:
@angelsong Thank you. I will try and get it done asap.
May 9th 2020, 2:24 am Report
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Bev:
@tlsteelman Great tune Tom. Unfortunately I can't be of any help. I don't have the gift to write the lyrics. Can't wait to hear what everyone comes up with. ♥♫
May 9th 2020, 5:32 am Report
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